This story's genre is fantasy and romance. The characters are Nick the prince, Ann the noble, Lucy the servant, and the king. This story's setting is in Andromeda palace. The title is "The prince of Andromeda"
Nick was the first prince of Andromeda. Nick became age for marriage. So the king of Andromeda forced Nick to marry with Ann. Ann was a noble woman and she always wear lots of jewelry and put on lots of make-ups. Nick said to the king, he will think a bit more about his marriage. And he went to his room. In his room, some servants came into his room. Nick noticed that there was a new servant who seems to be as old as him. Her name was Lucy and she was very pretty and kind. So nick fell in love with Lucy. Then Nick went to kings room and asked him " May I marry with Lucy a new servant?". Then the king seemed to be shocked and he strongly opposed to marry with Lucy because he thought this marriage would lower the value of Andromeda.
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Your finalized version of the story is much better than what you had shown me for the first time. However, your story could have been better if you had described the emotions and thoughts of each characters in the endings. Some of your endings do not describe about the main characters. Anyway, your story was very entertaining to read :)
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